] 4. Remove every extraneous word ] ] You want to get up on a soapbox and preach? Fine. Get one ] and try your local park. You want to write for money? Get ] to the point. And if you remove all the excess garbage ] and discover you can't find the point, tear up what you ] wrote and start all over again . . . or try something ] new. ... uhhhh I like Steven King and all, but I can think of several of his books that are a few hundred pages too long. He'll have a good plot point or situation, and repeat it... for...ever... Why wouldn't this rock bleed? Everything you Need to Know About Writing Successfully: in Ten Minutes (Stephen King) |