] 4. Remove every extraneous word ] ] You want to get up on a soapbox and preach? Fine. Get one ] and try your local park. You want to write for money? Get ] to the point. And if you remove all the excess garbage ] and discover you can't find the point, tear up what you ] wrote and start all over again . . . or try something ] new. [ Holy shit! Steven FUCKING King is encouraging writers to be concise?! Every single one of his full length novels could be reduced by 20-50%, at least. Ok, fine, i can only speak to the ones i've read, and I'll admit I gave up on his ass some time ago, but shit man, this motherfucker can describe a scene for 14 pages without getting around to any action on the part of the actors in the story. -k] |