Palindrome wrote:
] Your whole life you live in sunshine
] Light, Innocent, Warm
] One small moment in time and the whole world crumbles
] One instant and it’s gone. Life as you know it is over
]
] Cry, Beg, Plead
] But you can never get it back!
] No matter how hard you struggle for it you can never get it
] back
] It is over and you are reeling in confusion
]
] Dark, Desolate, Cold
] You scream “Why me?!”
] Enraged enough to expect an answer
] Truly “Why me” but then again “why anyone”
] Truly bad things happen to good people
]
] All the sudden you find yourself questioning everything you
] have ever known to be true
] Everything you have lived your whole life by is suddenly
] questionable
] A shiver courses through your body as you are overcome with
] loneliness
]
] Alone, Empty, Numb
] There is no God!
] There can’t be a God!
] If there is how could he do these things?
] Why does it have to hurt so bad?
]
] Hollow, Tired, Hopeless
] As you break down and fall to your knees the hollowness grows
] Your world comes crashing down around you
] You urn to truly believe everything will be ok
] You long for the warm tenderness of a familiar touch
]
] You are soon overcome with the realization that life as you
] know it is over
] You no longer contain the will to live
] Your body and mind are totally exhausted
] You give up the fight and slowly slip into the cold darkness
]
] Close by another child is born in to the warm, bright,
] innocence that you could no longer find.

Very nice. Hope it doesn't fully represent your own mental position at this time. The hopeful ending (when taken in the larger scheme) leaves things on an upbeat note, but damn, it's an awfully sad piece of work. Great work though. Keep 'em coming. It's nice to go to memestreams and check out a purely creative work.
More users should do this. Again, thanks Palindrome.

RE: Birth (this one's for Vile)